My Factory-tastic Food Factory Letter

WALT persuade people to build/not build the factory on our courts. We received a letter from Fletchers Food Factories. They wanted to replace the courts and the old playground with a factory and parking lots. I know I have persuade people to build/not build the factory on our courts by write a letter to them if we want to factory or not.  This is a letter I wrote to the Fletchers Family Food Factories.

Saint Patricks School

Freddie Fletcher

Fletchers Family Food Factories 

Auckland                                                                                                                                    29/08/13

Dear Freddie,

I believe that Fletchers Family Food Factories is fantastic for our school.

Building a factory on our courts would be great because they will give us a contest to create a new playground for Room 4 and 5. We don't need to pay for it. It will have a wooden castle, slides, bridges and other obstacles. Without the playground, we wouldn't exercise and we wouldn't lose weight. Do you want to design the new playground? Designing the playground is awesome, playing in the playground is fun, playing in the playground makes us fit.

Another reason why building a factory on our courts is great because they will give us CCTV. Without CCTV, thieves will steal our things. CCTV is a security camera that has a TV to see if thieves are about to steal our school property. Would you want your things to be stolen? You would be sad and you'll get told off from the teacher. CCTV is cool, CCTV is great, CCTV is the best camera ever!

The final reason why building a factory on the top court is great because there is going to be light traffic.  There is going to be less cars which makes less smoke and less noise. There is going to be a small car park replacing the old playground replacing the bottom court. Would you like the noise level the heavy traffic makes? It will distract your learning your playtime, and your other important learning.  Less cars, less smoke, less noise. 

If we have a factory, we can have a new park for Room 4 and 5, we can have the best security camera and there is going to be less traffic. Fletchers Family Food Factories is fantastic on our courts.

Yours Faithfully,
Greshka

Student